Community Team Marija Posted February 21, 2022 Community Team Share Posted February 21, 2022 Hi guys! I noticed some topics on forum that are focused on writing, words game and similar so I thought some of you might be interested into taking this to a new level - Poetry Competition! I'm someone who likes and used to write poetry myself, so this is also for my own pleasure If you are interested in participating, here are the things to know! We wont have any sort of applying for the competition, simply posting the poems in this thread is ''applying''. You can of course say its for the competition etc. The competition will last 7 days, closing on the next Monday ( 28th February ) at 10am CET. For that time, you are allowed to post, edit, change your poems or even quit if you wish. But after Monday 10am, there is no more changes, we will consider the poem your final post. The rules are very simple: Follow the forum rules on basic common decency while writing A poem can be about anything, full artistic freedom is given (That means literally anything, it doesnt need to be SuperMechs) A poem shouldnt be shorter than a couple lines or longer than 20 lines ( Have in mind someone has to read many poems probably ) For the rewards part, I decided not to make it a large reward as this is more about the art and not the reward itself. Plus I'm taking into consideration the past experience in competitions :)) So the rewards will be symbolic: Place gets a forum badge for winning the poetry competition and 300 tokens Place gets 200 tokens Place gets 100 tokens After the competition is closed, we will take some time to read everything through and decide the winners. While deciding the winners, we will take into consideration stuff like the creativity, choice of words, the overall look and etc. I will also check the reactions to the poems, ask my team members for their opinions as well since luckily, some of them like poetry! I will post the results in this thread. If you have any questions, do ask them here, please try not to clog the thread obviously. I wish you good luck and happy writing! I hope we will all enjoy this and have fun writing or reading. Who knows, maybe even discover a new talent we didnt know we had #poetry_nerds Zutchse, The_Real_Ramsay49, Lifeblood Deep and 15 others 17 1 Elcent is the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lifeblood Deep Posted February 21, 2022 Share Posted February 21, 2022 (edited) i want to yeet all frantics into the great atlantic both hot flash and malice beam can be replaced with egg cream i hate the explosive retreat it can just go delete the people who use purifier their brains were cooked in an air fryer people who use stormweaver i hope that you catch a fever them theres the battery armor you might as well be a self harmer if you dont use resist drainers you are basically a no-brainer for if you dont drain them all you might as well fight a wall sincerely, Lifeblood Deep P.S dont take this seriously Edited February 22, 2022 by Lifeblood Deep bruh (see edit history) Stelight, Raphmach, Wolf. and 8 others 1 1 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monke King Posted February 21, 2022 Share Posted February 21, 2022 (edited) Lost inside my mind With thoughts swirling inside me Like a tornado entered the room Filled with worries and doubts I fall to the floor writhing in pain Repeating the same question over and over When will I get a TerrorBlade? Edited February 21, 2022 by Ur Hacking Last one was bad (see edit history) W.P.O.T.W, Ad1tya, Marija and 2 others 4 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W.P.O.T.W Posted February 21, 2022 Share Posted February 21, 2022 This post was recognized by Marija! "Congrats on winning our first poetry competition!" W.P.O.T.W was awarded the badge 'Poetry competition winner' A room inside an ocean at night. A ceiling just above its surface. It is pitch black aside from a single sea green light on the bow of an old and creaky wooden ship. It howls every time the waves shift it. You are laying twenty feet ahead of it, affixed to a bed that moves also with the waves. Below you is the ravenous sea, dark as anything could be. No explanation, no method of escape, nothing. This is how you woke up one day. And its how you remain forever. A torture without pain. Monke King, Marija, Ad1tya and 1 other 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liioh Posted February 21, 2022 Share Posted February 21, 2022 Troy Beyond this shore, across the sea there lay A citadel whose walls had once stood high, Whose lights burned bright until the break of day, Their pillars stretching up to touch the sky. 'Til Agamemnon's fleet came to that shore, And soldiers issued forth with shields and spears. In Priam's name the Trojans went to war And fought before those walls for countless years. But now that beach where Troy had once stood tall Lies cold, a lifeless husk whose streets unkept Still wind their way through springtime and through fall, Past homes where children slept and widows wept. But such is fate, that callous hand which leads Our lives and forges on despite our deeds. Predator, Ad1tya, Mechzilla and 3 others 6 Important links: Base disable (only one per person, not one per account): Create New Request - SuperMechs Community Junior mod applications: Create New Application - SuperMechs Community Item artist applications: Create New Record - SuperMechs Community Spoiler Why are you looking at this? Go check out the next post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BiCraftial Posted February 22, 2022 Share Posted February 22, 2022 (edited) I'm taking a risk posting this here, I hope it doesn't get stolen, also poems aren't always supposed to be perfect so I hope you look at the imperfections of my poems and see them as a part that can never be taken away. Anyways here's my story of a creature wanting to belong in a society in a world that does not seem to have any for him. I'd like to mention that I don't expect to win, I don't have the best writing skills and there are a lot of other good poems here. I am hoping to win but not to get the stuff, I am hoping to win to get feedback on my work. Part 1 The Blobman, waking up, The Blobman, looking around, Seeing that he was in a cup. The BlobMan started to climb, Climbing and climbing Right out of the cup, The BlobMan Climbed and climbed, Finally, getting to the top. The BlobMan, jumping without fear Onto the table, looking around, Studying the land of here. The BlobMan, deciding where to go, Thought and thought, And then started to roll. Roll and roll, right to the edge, Determining how far down the floor really was, Studied all the dust and fuzz Down below, BlobMan then jumped Again with no fear in his mind, setting out to search for more of his kind. Part 2 The Blobman sets off to look for others of his kind, Rolling and rolling Across the kitchen tile, By the time Blobman got to the carpet of the living room, He felt like he had gone a mile. Feeling a surplus of tire, He rolled under a couch And settled by an abandoned toy A kid used to admire. He slept and slept, Then woke up to a vacuum, A tool for a house well kept. Under the couch, he stayed, Waiting, With caution in mind, Until all the unfortunate dust bunnies had been slayed, And the vacuum was stowed away. And then again, set off To look for more of his kind. Part 3 The Blobman rolls down the hall, Wondering what he will find next during his journey. Rolling, rolling, he passes a doll, Stained and dirty, Neglected and left alone. The Blobman felt sad leaving her there, Because he knew how being left alone felt. Knowing that is why he needs to find more of his kind, He forges on, Knowing he will never forget the image of the doll. He turns to enter a room, And finds himself rolling on carpet, And sees many more toys on the floor, None of them are similar to him. Nonetheless, he rolled farther into the room away from the door, And kept looking, Knowing that soon he would find more of his kind. to be continued... Edited February 22, 2022 by BiCraftial (see edit history) Mechzilla, W.P.O.T.W, Marija and 3 others 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muffin Posted February 22, 2022 Share Posted February 22, 2022 (edited) Trying to get a nice build But, i have no clue Trying to get a clue, I was blue Got a fortune box from the campaign, trying to flew With a lengendary, or just a epic At this point, i was just trying to get a few picks But no, rng said:"No i will give you some common, now go away prick" I was almost consumed by the rage, want to throw my phone like a brick Well, i was desperated Like a bankrupted incorperate No no, there was not a miracle, just skeptical About what? About the fact that i will get a mythical Oh no, stop giving me physicals At this point i don't even care about the lore I can't take this any more The pvp is filled with people who has ridiculous equipments I can't pick a brawl I was going to be devoured by the pawns Crawl out of the hell I almost fell It was not very well I just want to jump in a well Well, i don't have idea Will end my career, smearing a grain of salt Why did i get a basalt dissovler When i am not a heat build, i do not like that discover Well, goobye for now I will be around Give me aplause There, im done 6 minutes ago, muffin said: Trying to get a nice build But, i have no clue Trying to get a clue, I was blue Got a fortune box from the campaign, trying to flew With a lengendary, or just a epic At this point, i was just trying to get a few picks But no, rng said:"No i will give you some common, now go away prick" I was almost consumed by the rage, want to throw my phone like a brick Well, i was desperated Like a bankrupted incorperate No no, there was not a miracle, just skeptical About what? About the fact that i will get a mythical Oh no, stop giving me physicals At this point i don't even care about the lore I can't take this any more The pvp is filled with people who has ridiculous equipments I can't pick a brawl I was going to be devoured by the pawns Crawl out of the hell I almost fell It was not very well I just want to jump in a well Well, i don't have idea Will end my career, smearing a grain of salt Why did i get a basalt dissovler When i am a heat build, i do not like that discover Well, goobye for now I will be around Give me token, or your mech will be broken Give me aplause There, im done *Well im a heat build, typo right there Edited February 22, 2022 by muffin T y p o s (see edit history) Ad1tya, W.P.O.T.W, Marija and 1 other 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cake62 Posted February 22, 2022 Share Posted February 22, 2022 (edited) Sir Spamsalot Oh he liked to spam a lot Just repeat it like a bot And keep silent like a thot So i though "why not" And used the frantics that i got But i got a lil too hot So the boiler put the dot So i went straight to counter My credit card on the counter Was hoping for a hot flash But all i got was cold ash And then i ripped out all my hair Cuz i was still damn nowhere With SM taking the Nobel I know sh- rings no bell Honestly i dont feel to well I feel like this game is hell Getting cucked by rng Might just go n jump bungee without a rope around my back Hoping a rock will crack my neck And then i'll finna end this heck And then go all the way back To the time games didn't lack When you didnt need to hack But my eyes just turned black Aaand i know this sounds wack But this is how i feel I wanna backflip down a hill And break all my bones until Fix the game, Gato will Edited February 22, 2022 by Cake62 to change a single word (see edit history) Monke King, Ad1tya, W.P.O.T.W and 2 others 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BiCraftial Posted February 23, 2022 Share Posted February 23, 2022 3 hours ago, Ad1tya said: When the nut was plentiful, when the nut was tender because I'm fasting from the nut, I go outside to clear my mind but I see a nut tree, I see nuts of every kind and so I begin to wonder, If fasting from the nut was a blunder should I just go crazy? should I release the thunder? But oh, no! I made a bet that I can resist the nut and I'm not above it. Best believe I'm not paying that 5 dollars a week left in my journey, for the nut I'm yearning the nut will not bug me, I'm not a roly poly I'm a man, the nut will not control me So December comes blooming, blooming like it's daisy Best believe, night of December your boy is going crazy. This is plagiarised Monke King, W.P.O.T.W, Lifeblood Deep and 1 other 1 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DefinitelyNotTrophy Posted February 23, 2022 Share Posted February 23, 2022 when i log in to supermechs i look for noobs to wreck but all i find is dual mod abusers and triple resistance users Marija, Mechzilla and Monke King 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clan Red Posted February 24, 2022 Share Posted February 24, 2022 (edited) Hello , Super mech is like a energy stream Flying into a sweet Dream . Gallop on the nightmares or teleporting out there . Let all the stars lite up and then you will all move Battle in the den and the arena will kill them. Get a lot tokens will fell little broken Reach for the stars to be a movie Star.( you tube) Step on the pedal and get all the medals🎖 Create a super BOT and you will all grow Ps No War …. Thanks you ! Edited February 26, 2022 by Clan Red Re edit (see edit history) Mechzilla, Monke King and Marija 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AftoKrator Posted February 24, 2022 Share Posted February 24, 2022 Custom sonnet- Memories let shining blue skies be draped in dark shrouds devouring the eye of heaven quickly revealing stars from the parting of clouds constellations together gleam brightly winter skies glows vividly from moon light breezy air clear of pollutions from light calm peaceful whistling echoes in the night as barred owls hovers from the trees up high how long will this wonderful image last? for time cannot be frozen for our needs for only our memories may be passed as death appears to claim our souls like seeds because time is precious and will not last we must not repeat ourselves like the past (i wrote this for an 8th grade poem project. ever since that, i used it every year whenever there's a poem unit in english class. ) Marija, Monke King, Mechzilla and 1 other 4 Discord: Aftokrator#9688 DeviantArt: Azorsia05 User Profile | DeviantArt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ad1tya Posted February 26, 2022 Share Posted February 26, 2022 On 2/24/2022 at 1:00 AM, BiCraftial said: This is plagiarised I know I just did this for the memes Monke King 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tigergeezer Posted February 27, 2022 Share Posted February 27, 2022 Oh Super Mechs I love you You know I always will But when I get all purple poops In a premium pack, I feel quite ill. Marija, AftoKrator, Monke King and 1 other 2 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stefix5000 Posted February 28, 2022 Share Posted February 28, 2022 Beneath the ground he roams A knight in iron clad, Of all the quests he's seen so far This one was rather rad. Around him naught but dark His trusty torch he holds, He's seen no foes before him yet His spirit he upholds. Before long now he stands At a fissure immense, Out of which a drake emerges The battle will commence. Dodging death with each strike The wise knight holds his breath, For he knows if his strike ain't true It would sure mean his death. The drake with its long neck And each slow bite implies, A weak-point in its bulwark skin Had caused the drake's demise. A single well-placed slash The knight showed no malice, Yet for his quest he took its head All hailed his name, Alex! Marija, A Happy F4ce and Monke King 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Community Team Marija Posted February 28, 2022 Author Community Team Share Posted February 28, 2022 And the competition is now closed! Please dont post any more applications! We will now take some time to read them all, I will bother the staff team for their opinions and then I will post our decision here. Thank you everyone for making these beautiful poems, my heart is full MechHeaters, W.P.O.T.W and Clan Red 3 Elcent is the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Happy F4ce Posted February 28, 2022 Share Posted February 28, 2022 (edited) This post was recognized by Marija! "Thank you for a great poem and a nice video!" A Happy F4ce was awarded 30 points. Well, looks like I got my time zones wrong I thought I had another hour. I guess I might aswell post my poem anyway. Glasgow's gray became my armour like a shot of whiskey, it burns yet warms. a painful lover, a duplicitous charmer she held me with her cold, pale arms. buckfast bottles, booze-glazed eyes Glasgow empties where most she fills. part-robbed bikes and cloud-fluffed skies Tennents lager cans were her daffodils. by jester's fate out from September dew like startled cats, there I met you. Time stood still and watched, amused, as we sang Temptation and jumped on que. For turning ripe, I stand accused As green turned red, I never knew what sweetness came from thoughts thereof - born again - I learned to love. I always was a child transfixed on the tempting warmth of forbidden fire reaching out I felt that heat suddenly, burned by my desire. Even still I sometimes ponder what secrets hide behind that danger and yet, a fool! there is no wonder why I was left to hide in sleepless nights. As a prisoner who held the key, time closed my wounds, and I set myself free just as the weary earth is struck by death, still a hardy green sprout will grow a-new. a scar reminds us - we draw breath yet, the battered muscle strengthens too. I treasure still those joy-full memories where we melted into cup-full bliss. Rugby, New Order, ribena cocktails a friendly face replaced a kiss. Like weathered oak, my roots now stronger faithfully we both grow older. Now I know in some way new you have loved me, and I've loved you. Hey guys, I did a reading of all the poetry and included some personal commentary. with the help of @Stefix5000 I have been able to upload this as a youtube video: the video is quite long in total but there are timestamps for each part in the pinned comment so you can watch it in parts and pick up where you left off at another point. hope you guys enjoy it Edited March 2, 2022 by Fidelio (see edit history) Marija, Lifeblood Deep, Monke King and 3 others 3 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Community Team Marija Posted March 3, 2022 Author Community Team Share Posted March 3, 2022 The results are here! I want to say Im very happy with how the competition turned out, Im proud of you guys I hope you had as much fun as I did reading and analyzing all these poems. Im not going to lie, it was a tough decision among the staff team, all the poems are great but the rules are rules, and we had to pick 3. And here is our judgment: 1st place goes to @W.P.O.T.W, amazing work of art, congrats! 2nd place goes to @AftoKrator, we enjoyed your poem and I hope your teachers did too! 3rd place goes to @Liioh, very interesting! I will ask all the winners to please DM me their ID number so I can give out their rewards I also need to make one honorable mention, @Fidelio. We were all sad seeing you didnt make it to apply on time, its such a shame, everyone loved your poem. And I am very thankful you made time to post your thoughts and analysis on youtube, it really wraps up this competition in a nice way. Thank you everyone for participating and sharing your poetry, you guys made forum a bit more interesting place with every line of your poems. Again saying, my heart is full Cheers! Electrick010, A Happy F4ce, MechHeaters and 2 others 5 Elcent is the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W.P.O.T.W Posted March 3, 2022 Share Posted March 3, 2022 holy shit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AftoKrator Posted March 4, 2022 Share Posted March 4, 2022 congrats yall. Monke King 1 Discord: Aftokrator#9688 DeviantArt: Azorsia05 User Profile | DeviantArt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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